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Click hereI awake, not sure how long I have been out. I turn my head to see you looking at me. "Welcome back," you say smiling.
"What happened?" I asked, unsure of how much time has passed.
"It appears you had a little too much, and you passed out for a minute there, I think that means a job well done," you reply.
I have felt like I might pass out from intense orgasms before, but it has never actually happened... until now. I sigh, happily recollecting the days events. "Thank you sir," I say looking at you.
"You are welcome, I hope you have enjoyed those orgasms." You respond.
"Well thank you for those too," I respond with a giggle, "but that wasn't what I was thanking you for."
You shift your gaze to me, "What then?"
"Thank you for not giving up on me, for not letting me walk away," I respond.
"I will never let you, you are MINE," you emphasize the word.
I giggle lightly, fully accepting your ownership, content and happy in the afterglow of the amazing sexual adventure that you have led me on.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI dream for a master like this. A master who keeps bringing her to multiple orgasms. I want to read more of your stories. Reading this series has me dripping in a way I haven't for a very long time.
Anonymousover 9 years agoThat was an amazing story. I encourage you to keep writing! Loved the plot and I am happy that they both got what they wanted in the end ;)
Mistress_Deziover 10 years agoyou guys are brutal .. .this is literotica... this is her erotica.. .that she experience either in life or in her head... Gosh... if you don't like the story just move on... Obviously there was history there between both parties or she wouldn't of let him in ... she knew what she was doing she is a grown woman... I love the story I hope you are inspired my the people who favored and write more...
redyellowgoalmost 11 years agoafter I read this...there is pushing limits and then there is disrespect. Maybe everything was said b/4 but as the author you did not explain that to me as a reader. Why was it not working? Why did she need to end it? Did he blow through a safeword? This is not a healthy relationship if it is only about what he wants and will take from her. I understand that this is a fantasy/story but where was the communication? Just a couple of lines in these three pages of understanding would have set you off to the hall of fame. Either her explaining in the intro or when he showed up, recaping their ending.
The way this started out and her attempt to say NO was GREAT and such a welcome change...what happened? Why couldn't you have kept her strong? And have him submit to her! That they saw what was needed from each other to move forward. You might have missed the mark on this one by just a bit, but you clearly have the writing skills to work a solid scene. (Unless you are just writing a stroke story w/o content.) Kept them coming. Just consider that all of the plot is covered nothing left open to question. Good first piece.
