All Comments on 'Submitting To My Roommate... Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Incredible

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please continue this story as soon as possible it has me so turned on because it is also my fantasy to be in that guys sub position Great Work!

miss_ann2669miss_ann2669over 20 years ago
yeah baby

awsome story wish there was more to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Can' Wait

I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
brilliant

one of the best

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
HOT HOT HOT

A great story, I loved both chapters. Chris is such a hot stud I can't wait for the next chapter to see how big of a cumslut he makes of his roommate. Thank you for a dick hardening story

kerbearkerbearalmost 19 years ago
wow what a hot little sissyboy to play with

wow,whats next for the sissy slave boy? I'm wet just thinking about it.You write very well and I can't wait to see what else is up his sleeve for his new toy.

cutandhornycutandhornyabout 17 years ago
looking forward to more of this HOT saga!!

Wow! I loved this story. The psychological torment that Dave suffers at the hands [and cock!] of Chris!!! So realistic, and supurbly plotted to keep Dave [and the reader] off balance, and wondering what's going to happen next!!!

KuroKitsuneKuroKitsuneabout 14 years ago
Kind of iffy

The thing is speaking from a psychological point of view that he fought at one point tells me that he doens't fully want this. I kind of feel that Chris is abusive and this being our main characters first time he deserves at least a little better. Though I understand that the main character seems to get off on humiliation a part of me things that he also likes to have at least some love and Chris isn't or won't provide that. That is why I rated this so low.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
It was GREAT!

Don't listen to KuroKitsune. This was one of the best stories I've ever read! From the submission to the defiance to another submission.. it was so good!

I hope you will make more chapters, this was so hot.

// Vicky

DevotaMaidDevotaMaidover 13 years ago
I can't wait for the next part!

I'd love to hear what happens to him next. I'd love to read about him becoming the college whore.

MarkrollMarkrollabout 13 years ago
Reality

Anon and KuorKitsune.. are both right, and wrong. First, Chris is a grade A, first class asshole/shit head. Dave is a freshman at an all male college. Very vulnerable, especially after just finding out he likes gay things. Chris taped his seduction and got him to say things he would not have said into a tape. He has an opportunity to have a friend and maybe a lover for life. Dave can be gently led into all the joys of gay love. Dave's fight is not about the gayness, it is about the abuse. Any bigger guy can physically and maybe verbally and mentally force another. Call someone 'no good' long enough and they will believe it. And Dave is just at the wrong point in his life that this takes. Dave hints that he would let Chris lead, but he wants love and Dave is just cold. My brother fell into the grasp of a "Chris"; and he ended up dead. So don't tell me this is kool.

WickedWitch79WickedWitch79about 13 years ago
Well

This is another one story which make me sad, and especially when I read all this comments. Especially this which one admire Chris's behavior, and this whom want to be on Dave's place. I pity them a lot, cos I do understand people are aroused by thousands of different things but they should be always safe. Psychically, mentally and physically. And Chis is not real man, not even a little. He is just dumb meat and people like him destroy real meaning D/S and are dangerous. In way which is not sexy or aroused even a little bit.If man want to be dangerous, dominant and sexy , he need to have a BRAIN and HEART.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
finally

Thanks wicked its not just me that finds that kind of thing sad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
O__O

I loved this so much. It really turns me on.

Does that make me sick?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

It was good but seemed a bit way too rough and sad.. Maybe make the 3rd one with a little more love? :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really Hott...

I really enjoyed your story. I absolutely love being totally feminine for my man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
lucious

wish I had a roomate like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very nice

it happen on day i was working for a man and i fell into mud water i was all dirty and my clothes all wet he told me let go to the house and get you out of those wet clothes i said yes i thought he would see my red thong panties i got undress and put my wet clothes on the floor here a towel go shower and i put your clothes in the wash when i came out wrap around with a towel he hand me some clothes go put them on and come back here i went and got dress i look at the clothes there was pink panties and bra a blouse and dress i put them on he told me that all the clothes he had then he told me he saw my panties he ask how long you wore panties i told him a few years he walk over to me and look you look nice in that outfit he show me a mirror he was behind me as i look i felt his hand on my ass i did not move then he lift my dress i back up a bit now as he pat my ass he move his hand all over my ass pinch it i still not move then his hand with to my nipple and pinch them he then ask do my baby girl like what her new daddy doing i said yes he said yes what yes daddy your baby girl like this just then his other hand pull my panties off then he turn me around and put me on my kness that when i saw his cock now baby girl daddy going to teach you how to suck cock just then he shove his cock in my mouth i start to suck well i see my baby girl has done this before yes daddy i have just once well then you will become my sissy bitch well after two years i have become daddy bitch and daddy had me grow tits daddy told me now you look more girl then a male and if you leave people will look at you as a fairy i told daddy i will not leave that my baby then you are my sissy girl slave i said yes well now i belong to daddy and his friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Pease continue this story its made me so hard and I just want more :p

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I was made to realize i was gay when I was 48. I didn't feel like I was forced into anything. I just found out that I loved being a cock sucker. In less than 24 hours, I ended up sucking 11 cocks and being fucked by 2 men. I am so happy that I was shown that I am a whose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LIKE! BUT CH. 1 WAS BETTER. GAVE THIS CHAPTER A 4 (****) THIS CHAPTER IS EROTIC & REALISTIC

Ch. 1 was EPIC, PRICELESS.

Having said that, let me add i am glad i read this Chapter, too.

I always was very confused when a strong & self confident man treats me in an authoritarian way. I have a fetish for authoritarian men in position of power who are also quite arrogant & treat me disrespectfuly. Essentially in those moments my submissive side comes to the fore.

Whatever that authoritarian man says or does to me, i never protest or fight back. I try to treat is as a joke. In those moments i want to be abused. My ass was referred to as "buble butt". I was spanked on it. My ass was pinched...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 1 year ago

Who doesn't love the initial pain and hurt followed by pure pleasure of a big cockt and strong man dominating you. Please

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Write more about them have them getting an apartment. David becomes Danielle and becomes a full-time submissive slutwife.

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