All Comments on 'Succubus Keep'

-lips are licked, slightly bitten- how interesting...for I personally know Guyon & believe Me....its perfect!

~Madame~

ManyEyedHydra, this is great work. I love it when the man falls prey to the seduction of a succubus and far too late finds himself trapped. You are a great writer for these creatures. I tip my hat at your abilities in writing erotica.

Great storyline and very well executed. Loved the Leila character and the way she dissolves his resistance with her wiles and body. Sterling stuff!

I never get tired of well-written Succubus stories, I'm ready to surrender.

"...a creature built purely for pleasure and sin" - very well written.

Title say it all.

Loved the seduction, REALLY loved the hero, The succubus was steamy, seductive.

I want prequel with this character or Better him escape and we do it all over again!!!!

...Game? there is a game? Oooooo

I think she should either work over to your other story...or maybe start one of her own...but anyways...I loved it

Loved that story it was soo hot, and you know of course that the future is fluid what you see is only one of many different possible pathways. So I'd say that his will would actually be strong enough to fight her.

Can we have him escape with a fluke? I would love to see this succubus hunt him down and seduce the knight with all sexy spells and feminine wiles.

It is so much fun watch this brave knight meet his end. AGAIN!

LOVED the Demon Lord too!

Are there plans for more of this series? I really hope so, since you left the end open. To have this retold all over again would be a real treat! The succubus, the hero, and the vengeful crippled demon is the perfect combination.

A freak escape could turn into a merry chase since the Demon now knows the knight's weakness. All ending in a wonderfully seductive conclusion?

This is one of the best succubus stories i have read! I loved the ending, so many different ways to keep it going! Don't stop what you're doing! Handsome knight, beautiful succubus, what could be more intoxicating? I truly hope there will be more to come!

Please tell me you are going continue the Succubus Keep stories. They are soooooo erotic, I just love to watch that knight struggle. Bites her lip.

OMG this story was amazing. Is it correct form below that there will be a sequel?

I can't wait to read more of this story

One word: AMAZING!

This is the best succubus story ever. period.

The characters are great, the plot intensive, and the action very steamy. Please make more of this one!

On to the review:

The set up was well done, I liked how the trap was set. The knight was likable and I was torn between rootling for him, and wanted to see him drained by the succubus.

The main demon was perfect. He show emotion and a lots of character as well as persnally flaws.

The succubus was the star. She was so differnt from other ones. She had personally, you could see her think, and she knew just what to do. I loved how she interacted with the knight, and broke him down.

It would be a shame not to see at least 1 more, like what actually happens after she really visits him.

Applauds for a well crafted story.

Ain't many Succubus stories that I say could "Take the cake", but this is definitely one of them. Very well written.

Was the computer game you mentioned in the intro ever finished?

@FasterFalcon

No, I don't believe it was, unfortunately. :(

I thought this was totally awesome :)

Thanks!

Yep, it's me again lol. Anyway, this had a distinctly different feel from the last few stories I've read from you but it was no less perfectly executed. Keep up the wonderful and quite erotic good work.

Good plot, well written, almost no distracting editing problems. I liked the way you let the reader have his cake and eat it too. Thanks. Now to sample your other stories.

Best erotic read I have ever ran into

Best erotic story I have ever ran into

Don't think I'd mind dying like that at all ;)

Shame we men are all suckers to our pleasures!

Best death,aint it?

Good twist in the end ther.

Absolutely the best succubus story ever. Please do a follow up on what actually happened. Or perhaps a trilogy?

See title. :D

Very enriching tome of erotica Many Eyes... Really splendid description and creation of a noble knight and his hopeless potential final fight. Although, the lovely Leila was another irresistible succubus in your literary legend, I still was pulling for

noble Elam to overcome the delicious demon. Very nice touch with the temporary aid the Cross was for Elam and how all hope was lost when she snaped the holy Christ symbol. Damn, this succubus was oh so bad and yet who can say no the ultimate pleasure? Not me, I'm afraid...at least if they are created by you Hydra!

Simply the best succubus story EVER! Please, Please, Please. Add another chapter, or two to this!

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE make more of this story!!!! It is the best one I have ever read. Love the struggle and the succubus powers. But mostly the seduction.

Amazing story, maybe the best succubus I have ever read. Any chance of making this a mini-series? though I do want the knight to meet a sexy end. LOL

Agreed this should be a mini series with the succubus and Elan. Maybe a prequel?

Either way it is far too good for just one story.

Every man struggles within himself to be strong, and yet to surrender to something so primal, so tender, so completely encompassing that he can abandon all semblance of resistance with a clear conscience. You have found the key to describing that sense with exquisite accuracy, and bathe us in it- the glorious bliss of becoming in touch with our most essential needs...

Imagine, in your most vulnerable of moments, how it would carry you away to feel soft wings wrapping around you, drawing you into the closest of embraces where you could not pull away from the touch of skin- soft upon soft, and to feel that emotional gush of reserve giving way as you are coaxed into release, into surrender to forces so subtle, so irresistable. This is what you draw so beautifully for us, precious scrivener of our dearest heart's desire...

I really was hoping that Elan would pull through and break her neck or something. A sad ending for a great hero.

This is the best succubus story I have ever read. It has so many erotic twists, and I like how the hero struggles but is eventually drained.

Love the characters, the writing, but it is the story that makes this post... "simply the best."

A succubus vs a guy with erectile dysfunction, the guy wins in the end .

A very well written parable on the importance of choosing the right tool for the job.

I'd love to see a part two where she betrays the demon

Did Guyon ever complete his game?

Best story I have read here.

Crazy good.

Part 2 please. .