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mBrowmBrowalmost 11 years ago
Wham-Bam?

Seemed a little over-the-top on Sam's hugely numerous 'entanglements.' Reckon I appreciate better stories with the seduction preceding the deed and reward/punishment. But the story was technically well-done, with good grammar, and sensible plot development that did not confuse me. So thanks for the effort and amusement!

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Eternally torn between lengthy depictions of mythical landscapes in old leather bound books full of hard to pronounce words, and barking at strangers.