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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not bad but ...

... not very Halloweenish either.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Tricks and treats~

well, somebody got some treats and tricks for halloween, erotic tale, good luck and (*_*) Happy Halloween!

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Nice work...

Good luck with the contest!

sacksackover 19 years ago
Very hot!!

I haven't given too many "5"s to the Halloween Contest Entries, but this was exceptional. Concise, sexy, with an unexpected ending. You're a great writer! You may like my two contest entries, The Mask (funny) and Who Killed Lois Laynes, a murder mystery in the New section. Feel free to vote/send a public comment. Good luck!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
That got me sooo hot!

OMG...this got me so hot, I had to go grab my toy--which is my vac--and suck myself off! Wow! (btw, I'm a woman, in case you're wondering). ;-) I have a special request...would you please write a story about someone-pref male-getting off with a vac? That would send me over the edge! Thanks for the super read!

Makybe_DivaMakybe_Divaover 14 years ago
Mmmm, hot and creepy

... which is what this category is supposed to be. Good job.

zrotparzrotparalmost 2 years ago

Nice! I like the idea of a woman having such a tight grip on my cock that it's difficult if not impossible to pull away.

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