by HornyHuman
I not only edited this piece, and its first part, but loved it. It isn't original or terribly imaginative, but it tells a story that many girls live out, or daydream about. What sets this version of the age-old tale apart is its simplicity and honesty. Its simply erotic, and honestly straightforward. If you want a fantasy that you can gobble up like your favorite candy, this is a great one.
So, sit back, grab something firm to hold onto, and dive in.