All Comments on 'Summer Break Ch. 02'

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Yoni_NoniYoni_Nonialmost 10 years ago
Fresh & Hot

I not only edited this piece, and its first part, but loved it. It isn't original or terribly imaginative, but it tells a story that many girls live out, or daydream about. What sets this version of the age-old tale apart is its simplicity and honesty. Its simply erotic, and honestly straightforward. If you want a fantasy that you can gobble up like your favorite candy, this is a great one.

So, sit back, grab something firm to hold onto, and dive in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 3

Tina's father goes over to Glen's house and kick his ass.

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