All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 01'

Every guy dreams of knowing a sexy exhibitionist like that. even if theres never contact, your ego loves her attention, and if it goes farther all the better.

Great story I marked you as a favorite author. The guy has opinions like mine. Let my beautiful wife show her body if she likes I know who she is going home with and that is all that matters.

So looking forward to part 2. She sounds like my wife when we were dating.

lol ;)

I totally loved your story. Great writing. Keep it up. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.

I love how you describe Summer at one point as looking "like a happy song." I'm looking forward to reading more about Summer and Jake's adventures.

You wonderful, perfectly hot fucktoy. How innocent you still are in this chapter. Hehe.

Delightful, though Bill seems unnecessary to the story and somewhat distracting. 5

jim

Very seductive and sensual. Love the imagery and the way you described everything she was trying on. 5 stars

Great to see a story build, not just the jump right into it. Seduction is the key to claiming her mind.

Excellent story! Can't wait to read the rest. One of the best story beginnings I've read.

I read this when it first came out. Had to read it again. It is so hot! I will definitely be reading, (or rereading), more of the Summer stories.

The description of what he wants her wearing and why was the hottest scene on this site and exsactly how i feel too.

Summer reminds me of Keisha Grey, the Porn star because of how her figure was described.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mKZ21Smv9Xw

You do a great job of describing the excitement of the tease

Very sexy and good buildup, love this type of story. The spanking and the last outfit teasing was a total turn on. Sexy af!

So hot! Great writing! My first story of yours. I’m going to enjoy your stuff.

You make me want to be there to experience what you are so perfectly describing.

Quite possibly the hottest story ever!

Nothing better than a nice hot story, now where's my rabbit for the second reading.

I loved teasing my hubby on long car rides, I'd take a vibrator along and slowly push it in and out of my pussy, its a miracle we survived the drives.