by brentaden
You certainly know how to build a story and send it in the right direction.
Personally very interested to see how this progresses and when the conflict appears to ratchet up the tension.
5 solid stars sir
You know how to build a story up but It's not dragging along so it's still enjoyable
This is like a chickmovie about falling in love with a prince with just a faint hint of bdsm.