by CaliSatinDoll
If Melody has never been with a white man before then how could she have a daughter (Cambria) that was half white half black that just doesnt make any sense to me. Goood on the whole and please continue the story but sort out the holes in it
this is the best story i have read in a long time ,great thanks
The title says it all: I hope that this story continues; there would seem to be a lot of possibilities for developing it.
Well Authoress, a talented effort in many ways. Yes there was the color issue but as it should be it was ancillary to the story. An addition not a distraction.<P>
You should be proud of this and consider another or an extension of this storyline.<P>
With High Regard
I'm always on the lookout for good white male/black female stories and this is one of the sweetest, most romantic I've read on this site. Looking forward to more.
That was great I want more to the story best one on here in a little while to my interest.
This story was passionate and lustful! I hope the author continues to write under the same theme - white men and black women, which is the hottest combo known to the world!
I love to read about white men who love black women. I thought this story was great, but I find myself wanting more to it, like will they try and form a relationship or was this just a one time thing and if they do continue, how do they deal with their forbidden love. I'm hoping that there is more. Thanks.
I like stories about interracial sex but I like this genre the most when the story is wrapped around a difficult subject - in this case, being poor, Black and living in Mississippi during the Depression. This author conveys the appropriate atmosphere of the times. Can't you just feel how impossible the love between Melody and John must have been back in the Old South of 1936? Don't you just cheer when these two get together? It's such forbidden fruit, as opposed to Strange Fruit, that you know that it's going to be great when they finally get it on. The author does not disappoint with the sex. A well-put together story.
Well CaliSatinDoll, that was by far one of the best interracial stories I ever read....right out of my own fantasies, and then some. I sincerely hope you will write more.
I like the era the story was set in and the love making was hot! i hope there is more to this story to come!
This story evokes deep feeling I have had for a young ebony doll I once dated . Sex with her was also like this. taboo but very exciting. I have still fantasies about those days with my ebony lover. I hope someday to experience that type of love and intensity again.
The Pilot
It has been almost a year since this fine story appeared and I sincerely hope the author has more in store for us.
Yes, I agree that the situation presented in your story happened a lot in the South.. Love knows no color..A great read
I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.
I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk
Thanks a lot and best of luck
James
PS I loved the photo as well!!
Well done my friend and thanks for the note letting me know your story was posted! I truly look forward to reading more of your work!!!
Marine55rick
What a well written story and of course,my fantasy with a black woman. It really makes one wonder why we have racism. I think their is nothing more erotic than a black woman.I guess I'll just go on dreaming about "my" black girl mmmmm !
Write more of these ,as I'm sure their are a lot of white men that have the same fantasies as me.
Thanx and by the way nice pic
This was a very well done romance. One happened to be black (colored) as was the term when I grew up the other white.
There is something special about being with someone who is more than just another body. The connection is unbelieveable when the entire universe ends at the edge of the bed. I felt that here. I really felt like the spider on the wall. Well done.
Jenelle