by spankedboy
One of the best scene you ever wrote, the bus one. Fantastic, erotic, amazing. I wish Sachin would have fucked Taiba in bus whilr minnows surrounded. Might be when Taiba is returning in night!..
Very nice descriptions of Taiba's big buttocks, though I am not a fan of nonconsent (well written though). Can't wait to see Shaheen having sex with her nephew
What a setting! What writing! What story!
I was so involved in the scene. You write the best, most descriptive scenes of Indian erotica. You are my favourite writer. I could feel being Taiba in this scene. And her gorgeous buttocks! Her big buttocks!
Please do write new chapters ASAP. I want to see shaheen and taiba together with Naaz
A huge fan of this series n waiting to read abt third aunt n the maid...but yea hate the long wait to read your episodes but love the work n appreciate the writing...n if possible don’t make Raina getting raped by those gone...all aunts r naazus to fuck ...hope u won’t let it happen ..
This story took an ugly turn. The sweetness of the initial chapters with consent is now gone for a toss. Keep it between Nazu and his aunts. Don't want stupid hoodlums raping them.
Boss u r a fantastic author but I genuienly don't want any of MY aunties to be handled or mis-handled by any body else... its only and only me who would make them feel like a woman...
Yours Sincerely,
Naazu....
Can you let us know as to when we can expect the next part of the series.
Do some Women allow such things in crowded bus and go again knowing hard'ons rubbing their hips and move on as if nothing happened and go about with life a,only because sexual intercourse did not happen is not so understood??
Hi. At this point I am not sure when I can pick up the story. When I started, I said this would be a slow boiler! There's still a lot of the story to be revealed, and after all ... Nadia still hasn't entered the scene. I do want to take my time and write it. I don't want to rush it. After all, I want to read my own story and be happy with the quality.
There is a reason I introduced Sachin into the story. Some of your eagle eyed fans may have noticed that Sachin is also there in one of the Vidya stories ! As others may have guessed, Taiba is a complicated woman. There is more to her than it meets the eye. Yes, this last episode is of non-consent, but again, there is a reason.
But unfortunately I am not sure when I plan to continue to start writing this series again. For now, I do want to finish the maid and Vidya series first. Both are nearing their end game.
I've read these 12 parts again and again...and again..goshhh...please upload the next chapter...my member is throbbing with anticipation..u get what I mean right!!
Come on mannn...please update soon...can't wait for the next chapter of Taibeee...I love her...u can even write a short chapter or something..atleast let us know that ure still alive and kicking out thr
Aghhh..I wanna have some more of Taibee's arse..you get what I mean eh..write a bit faster!
Bro..please write naa🥲🥲🥲🥲...I'm regularly checking for update..no update..i want to know what happens to buxom Taibee😍...please bro..write bro🥺🥺
You write really well. One of the best stories on this site with an Indian theme. Will go through your other work as well. Do you publish your content anywhere else?
Massimo, Thank you for your words. Not sure when I can continue this. Glad to hear the story can make your member throbbing with anticipation.
Anon, Taibee will return. Not sure when. I have all these ideas, but haven't had the time to edit properly. Don't want to compromise quality. Better to leave it like this.
Ashudhdesi, what is NTR?
Massimo, I hear you. I see you.
Anon, lol . Everyone wants Taibee.
Anon, happy new year.
Wizardnin, not sure.
Anon, not sure when I will update.
Anon, hopefully there will be a new chapter.
Anon, Thanks. I don't publish anywhere else. I have noticed a few sites which ripped off my stories so I am discouraged to write here as well. Even on LE one writer copied one of my stories to pass as their own.
Man, consistency is key. You don't show up we forget you and eventually the story, better post with some mistakes then don't post anything at all. Ye understand gansta, capische ?
Broo. Please add the next part soon broo. I just can't wait to know what happens next. Please broo. Please
Next Chapter, Please!
I appreciate not only the Author's Poetic Eye to behold beauty in its Virgin Glory but also the humane conscience to feel for the women facing molestation at various hands.
Narration in Chapter 12 may be a bit exaggerated for dramatic effect. But, he did etch out a graphic account of what women undergo at public spaces and even in their homes.
The Poetic Eye in him the Glory, Glamour and Grace in a MILF, who awakens monstrous passions dormant inside men. Kudos to the Author.
But, Next Chapter Please. Ramesh69691@outlook.com
I assume Taiba as my hot mami.. Continue the story as I and my Mami fantasize our extra marital affairs
Update please!!!
And try not to involve the thugs in this story, it'd be great if this was focused around the aunts and their nephew!
Hi.... eagerly awaiting next chapters only mami/s n nazu no other people... please
Bro can you atleast let PPL know whether you are going to continue this series or not??!!!
I read the beginning of this story many years ago. I never forgot the story, but forgot the title. Believe me I spent years looking for this story, before I finally found it again last year. Now I check every few months if there is any update. It's such a great story, I wish someone could make a film based on this script in the future.
Everytime i read this story i get wet, soaking and throbbing as well....non con is the only genre i read, and how wonderfully you handled her predicament. No violence, no gratuitous cruelty, meaness, vulgarity etc. Just pure predicament.
I'd also like to know what the heck is NTR???
Hey man!!..comeon..the most anticipated is this story for years..but you still submit other stories regularly.. atleast give us two pages for now Spankedboy
@anon, this is not a paid gig. So no need for consistency.
@anon, it is nowhere close to ready for publishing.
@anon, of course lol.
@anon (Ramesh69691) - yes, a lot of women face this on public transit. Of course this is exaggerated because this is erotica. In reality, it is unpleasant.
@anon, Taiba is one hot mamani.
@anon, the thugs were there for this story. Let's see if they will make a return.
@anon, there is still a lot of this story left.
@anon, yes, excessive time. No one is paying me to write this.
@anon,
-- Bro can you atleast let PPL know whether you are going to continue this series or not??!!!
Tell me, should I ?
@anon ,
-- I wish someone could make a film based on this script in the future.
I am sure there exists soft core porn based on this lol.
@merrySM, thanks for the comment.
Yes, let me know what is NTR.
@anon, let's see.
@Anon, a new man in mamani's life. Let's see.
@anon, I write what I want.
I do understand it is not paid..I know creative excellence takes time..but see...the last update was in 2021..kindly give us atleast one page per month..I think that's a good deal..which is a small request from your ardent follower maahn..consider it
After some well crafted slow boiling episodes earlier in this series, each later episode is now just sex sex sex. Maybe this is why author is not continuing this series.
I actually enjoyed this last episode. It was something different. Previously the aunties have hinted at being molested in public but this episode showed it.
@anon, yes I am aware last update was 2021 :-) Hopefully I get some time over the holidays to continue this series.
@anon, the seduction is always slow, and then sex, once it happens, is always sex sex sex initially.
Atleast tell us a tentative timeline about when you will be posting the next one..
Give us something yaar..we've been waiting for two whole years, and I've been logging onto literotica just to check if this particular story has an update..see, I love this series that much.. atleast give us a 3-4 pages in two weeks..and then maybe take a month to post the following..please consider boy!!
Your patient readers are waiting. Dear author, please write this series. This is the best India erotica on this site!
Thank you for the comments. Will write something over the next 2 months , maybe!
Finally!..two months huh, we've been waiting for two years..so yeah that's no biggie..
But try and make it one month..and we'll be your loyal fans forever.
Just one request though..
As much as I like your other work..where the protagonist is a cuckold or a sub..I would like it if Nazu is the dominating guy here..and remains to be in the conquest of conquering all his aunts *wink*.
Also..Taibee is now my sweet nickname to all those big-arse stranger aunties I gaze upon the streets. What to say..she has that effect on me and ig.. everybody!
@massimo1605 thanks for the comment. Glad to see long time readers comment always!
I saw you posting a 8 page story!!!!!
Man..please finish this one first..
This is the highly anticipated series from you and I'm twitching to know what happens to Taiba..and Shaheen and Nadia
At this point..you're just killing me by not releasing
This is by far the best Indian Erotica I've ever read. Keep it up. And Continue the series as soon as possible. Waiting for the next part
@Hi Massimo1605
I write what I feel like :-) That 8 page story .. half it was written over 4 years ago. From time to time I added to it. Finally it felt complete so I posted it. I will return to this series when I feel the story. Thanks for reading.
@anon Thanks for the comment.
Hey, whenever you do post could you please add in about the last mamani too,
Thanks
Loved the whole series. Eagerly waiting for even more new stories in the series!!!
@andy let's see when I can pick it up again
@anon the plan was to include the maid, but let's see
Brother!!.you told me you'd release another chapter for the new year..I'm waiting!!.
Please release soon 🙏
@anon when I feel up for it, I will write it and publish it , believe me. This is just a faltu time pass, not a real job.
@anon .. no. you cannot expect anything.
I do make it clear .. I have no obligations. I write when I want. Thanks.
Is it possible for you to atleast give us a month in which next part will be released??
I have read your maid story and loved it. This one was new to me and I am surprised how much I enjoyed it.
Keep going if you have time!
the taiba and the don arc would be a masterpiece if continued, please consider taking the time 🙏
After the morning bus, the don goes all the way with taiba in the evening bus. Written from a third person pov adds a next level thrill.. Reluctance, public sex, voyeurism all in one 🥵