All Comments on 'Summer Solstice'

Just beautiful.

Sooo beautiful ....

just a wonderful story i luved it beauiful

That is one very fine love story. Write more.

That was wow!

Best love story I've read .... please please please write more. Absolutely loved it!!!!!

Amazing. Great build up!

I couldn't care less about the grammar and punctuation. You made me care about Riley and Katey. Please, don't leave me hanging too long for more.

What a fantastic very loving story so full of ever thing ending with a beautiful very exciting horny sex between two very hot horny women love this story now i love more parts

Romantic and sexy. Beautiful story!

Please write more loved everything about it! Should be a movie 5 stars

EPIC, you left me wanting more...please submit a second part?! punctuation could be better but the material is what counts and you've got that down!

OMG More please keep writing about Riley and Katey. It was a charming story and I enjoyed it.

Very hard to read. Work with a proofreader. This is one of the steamiest, most arousing stories I've read. Your story deserves "full credit".

Beautiful please write more!

I fell in love with the characters and the story. Great build up

There is a right flow to your story. Just the right pace. And you have a gift with words.

But

You need a proof reader/ copy editor. Sometimes it is hard to read.

I fell in love with these two people. Also fell in love with the interior dialogue you crafted. Hope to read more from you. And to be selfish, I hope its the next phase of their story.

I loved the fact that you built a true basis for the emotions, tenderness and feelings which erupted finally into a wonderful love story. I agree with the other comments. You have a good talent and I would love to read more of your work. Thank you for giving us an opportunity to share a beautiful relationship.

Loved your story and your characters. Please say there's a second part to this beautiful story.

Beautiful read, I fell in love with Riley please bring her back.

This story hit home for me and it was beautifully written. Hope there's a second part.

loved it!

A truely wonderful story of love. 5 stars and more.

I love this story

I would give you 20 stars if I could

love Love Luuuuuuuuuuurv:D!!!!!!

I am so in love with Riley already... Beautiful.

I did have a hard time at the beginning with the grammar, it seemed to improve dramatically halfway through Page 2.

Story was wonderful, hope all ends well for them.

So far, this has been a very enjoyable story and I'm looking forward to reading the next two chapters. But... throughout there are so many grammatical and punctuation errors, together with some spelling errors, that they lessen all that is good about the tale. A good (and I mean good) editor should have been able to correct this for you. Also, to make the text look neater, write small numbers as words rather than figures. I've given you four stars for the enjoyment factor---but for all the errors it would have been five.

I'm sorry, I couldn't finish reading this as there were so many run-on sentences. For me it totally ruined what could have been a good story.

Great story. Time to read the next chapter.

Absolutely beautiful. The tears, they were a falling.

Lovely story.