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All Comments on 'Summer Song'

by VDinmor

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MADISONKAIMADISONKAIalmost 10 years ago
5 stars.

Nice start, looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it comes with more length.

63lsmith63lsmithalmost 10 years ago
4 STARS

4 stars for good writing, it was a good lead in, but should have gone a little further.

Looking forward to more, hopefully longer and some action.

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