by wilcox010
What a great series, I look forward to reading more about Summer and her transformation into a true Slut!
only problem is the story update takes a month.
wishing to see the story go forward more quickly.
I was just really getting into the story and it ended! I hope there will be more soon so I can stop this dripping between my legs. OR maybe add to it....
Funny, arch, pleasingly elaborate and with a full menu of transformatively submissive delights. This is a story that breaks the mold of the usual student/teacher bdsm: there's more than just cockiness on the dom's side, and Summer isn't just twisting unhappily in the wind. This is a saga worth waiting for, and still full of aching possibilities as promised!
This is so good pitty it finished so soon.
I really want to see what happens when Lisa sees her nipple piercing......
Next installment please
Later if she had her body tattooed all over would be great.
Keep going
Great story. Loved this series immensely and can't wait to see how she is used more. Lt. Dan
it's the best series I've read here. Todd, ooops, Master T, come to my 50 years old wife and train her like you've trained Summer....
Stupid bitch ! If I were her I would be so proud and glad to have my body all pierced and made into the body of a slut and actually be begging for them to give me a tramp stamp too, to combine with the belly button piercing.
That's where the men belong. For a LONG time. And, FYI, any piercing can be removed. Only a fool would believe otherwise. Poor effort.
The guy is an ass. The slap to her face was totally unacceptable. I'll never read one of your stories again.
As a typical married woman living in the UK
I love reading these types of story and trying to imagine myself in a position of the slut being made to do things with the fear of blackmail as a means of control
I have only read the chapter 5 so far
I'm not a schoolteacher
But I wish I could be blackmailed into all the things this slut is being forced to do I just don't know how I would explain the piercings to my husband I guess that would be my problem and whatever else happens to this slut I wish I could be in her place and have to experience everything she has two
I have a slut side but as usual it's mostly a couple of affairs now and again
I would love to have someone take control of my spare time who would blackmail me is the same as this story so I could really be a slut
This is the most intense and erotic scene. I do not like any hitting in the face. It is a turn off. Now that Summer is decorated, and being made to be humiliated by more and more strangers, I would love to see her forced to dance at a amateur nude contest at a strip club. You have me captivated except for the slapping. Keep writing.
The story is a scorcher, but you need to buy (and use) a dictionary. It isn't enough that a word sound similar to what you mean, it should be the right word. There are several examples in these first five chapters, and I should have made notes (you're not the only writer who does this), but one case occurs time and again: whelp when you should use welt. A whelp is a young canine, e.g. dog or wolf. A welt is the raised mark left by a whip, paddle or even a hand strike.
You might also pay a modicum of attention to a woman's anatomy. The G spot is located on the anterior wall of the vagina, about an inch to an inch and a half up from the entry. That nine inch prick isn't even close when fully in the vagina, though he could be hitting the A spot. The A spot is on the anterior wall of the vagina at the crown of the fornix. When stimulated, it causes the flow of vaginal lubricate without regard to whether the woman is aroused.
I think the person who writes this shit is an asshole and a wimp. I would like to kick his ass! He deserves to be treated like a slut himself. You girly little ass. What is wrong with you? Didn't your mother love you enough? Did your father abuse you? Did your wife cheat on you? You treat Summer like a whore. She's a nice girl and you treat her like a little whore. I especially like the part where you make her do nasty disgusting stuff. Perhaps you can make her sleep naked in the dog house. I would like that. Make the bitch pay for being such a slut. Bravo.
It's kind of boring reading the word slut on every other line.
If the guy is sure of himself why does he need to insult the poor girl verbally all the time?
Oh, I am enjoying this! Many descriptions of this kind of domination and degradation become tedious after a while but Mr Wilcox has the skill. I'm a male slave myself, newly taken by a Mistress. She is being gentle for the time being, but she is also determined and resolute - and she has a picture. Reading this, even though the enslaved person is a woman, makes me wonder just what depths may be in store for me, and is doubly arousing for that.
...dude, take a chill pill! First of all, this is a work of FICTION...FICTION, that means not real! Yeah, if this reflected the actions of an actual person, I might become as upset as you seem to be. But these are not even actual, living people, but rather, made-up fictional characters. So calm down, before you blow a gasket. And another thing; if
reading fiction upsets you so much, then read factual stories...oh, real people don't treat other people much better than fictional people, do they?
YOMEYO