All Comments on 'Sunrise Sunset Ch. 04'

Another strong chapter in this creative series. i really like how you explore Jen's and Mike's feelings and how they communicate their emotions. The tenderness combined with sexual desire is hot and makes it special. Thanks

You have crossed a line in your story. You have went from it being realistic to something cheap and bordering on disgusting. His so-clled friend Paul is a crude prick, that no man would let near someone that he was in a relationship with.

I will echo the words and opinion of the first Anon in his biting and realistic comments about "crossing the line...". Why in the hell would Mike and Jennifer agree to swing with Paul and kathy? Or anybody, for that matter.

They (Mike & Jennifer) seem to have a beautiful and safe relationship, albeit illicit. Both Kathy and Paul sound like losers. Plus, Kathy wants something she'll never have with that 'gossip-hound'. Paul.

You know, there are no reasons why this relationship has to end badly. This story is not some episode of a TV sit-com on 'morality'. There is no censorship problem!

What started out as a warm and realistic story has sunk to stupiitity