All Comments on 'Surfer Girls'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot!!!

Chapter 2 can't cum soon enough. Need to hear about ur slave

eating ur sweet pussy...

BlueFinchBlueFinchover 16 years ago
Hypnotising?

The plot was obvious, the story very quick and coarse, normally I hate these. But this one was different, I couldn't stop reading, fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More More!

Plot was easy to guess, but well written and exciting. More soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sometimes simplest is best

Not a sophisticated plot at all, but hot just the same. Love the domination aspect.

leann511leann511about 14 years ago
great story

I hope you have one or two more in you that you can share!

leann511

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago
Yes! oh no.

I don't have time to read the whole series right now.... This was so erotic. Such a seduction... not elaborate, but sudden and disarming. Mmmm. Maybe just Ch 02.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow

continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
come on

I know this is just a story, but I can't believe someone can get this turned on just by watching her walk

kellijane001kellijane001almost 4 years ago
Wow

I'm not a lesbian but that got me off. kelli (kellijane001@yahoo.com.au)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What a hot, sexy story and wow your writing is so good. Gave this story a 5 hope the other chapter is just as sexy.

ClaudiaNClaudiaN4 months ago

OMFG, what an incredible hot story

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