by novelnovice
Chapter 2 can't cum soon enough. Need to hear about ur slave
eating ur sweet pussy...
The plot was obvious, the story very quick and coarse, normally I hate these. But this one was different, I couldn't stop reading, fantastic!
Plot was easy to guess, but well written and exciting. More soon please
Not a sophisticated plot at all, but hot just the same. Love the domination aspect.
I hope you have one or two more in you that you can share!
leann511
I don't have time to read the whole series right now.... This was so erotic. Such a seduction... not elaborate, but sudden and disarming. Mmmm. Maybe just Ch 02.
I know this is just a story, but I can't believe someone can get this turned on just by watching her walk
I'm not a lesbian but that got me off. kelli (kellijane001@yahoo.com.au)
What a hot, sexy story and wow your writing is so good. Gave this story a 5 hope the other chapter is just as sexy.