by novelnovice
What a hot, sexy story and wow your writing is so good. Gave this story a 5 hope the other chapter is just as sexy.
I'm not a lesbian but that got me off. kelli (kellijane001@yahoo.com.au)
I know this is just a story, but I can't believe someone can get this turned on just by watching her walk
I don't have time to read the whole series right now.... This was so erotic. Such a seduction... not elaborate, but sudden and disarming. Mmmm. Maybe just Ch 02.
I hope you have one or two more in you that you can share!
leann511
Not a sophisticated plot at all, but hot just the same. Love the domination aspect.
Plot was easy to guess, but well written and exciting. More soon please
The plot was obvious, the story very quick and coarse, normally I hate these. But this one was different, I couldn't stop reading, fantastic!
Chapter 2 can't cum soon enough. Need to hear about ur slave
eating ur sweet pussy...