by cantbereal
You have him talking about watching this but there is no emotional feedback from him nor between the hubby and wife. It just isn't realistic.
I think that is so hot. I hope you share more as I know that she will be getting more BBC in the future.
He goes from being sorry and worried about their marriage to calling her a black cock whore in a paragraph? Hot sex but I think it needed more development before she falls to her knees.
Husband is not a man. Woman is not a wife. Only real character - ironically, since he is being used as a living dildo - is the conflicted black husband.
Nice. Liked the way you merged both stories. Hope there will be an other chapter.