All Comments on 'Swallowtail Ch. 11'

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
Another thrilling chapter of a marvellous story

I have, quite honestly, run out of things to say that would do justice to this wonderful story. Your talent shines like a beacon, even among the many fine stories here.

Very well done, thank you once again and another five stars!

redyellowgoredyellowgoalmost 11 years ago

Well its about time!!! One hell of a series....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is as far as I can go with this. I can see the Dom/sub interplay in the context of sexual gratification, but as a requirement to maintain a relationship? It speaks to me of unresolved emotional issues on both sides of the equation. Both sides dealing with their own perceived insecurities and inadequacies in opposite ways.

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