All Comments on 'Sweet Nineteen'

Excellent first instalment Eve, I do hope you will continue with this.

charles

Great first story. The theme you took is hard to find in Literotica. Most BDSM stories are the other way around and sexist. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and please keep on writing.

It's not very clear when the heroine took off her clothes. You move from part II when she's fully dressed to Part III and I gues we were supposed to just assume, at that point, that she'd naked. That little detail being missing, unfortunately, pretty well ruined the story for me. Otherwise, it was a very nicely paced, erotic tale.

Thank you for your encouragements! I will definitely write more. Nice to know that my first story was liked by someone!

One little thing: there is NO nudity in this story. That is why it is tagged as cfnm (clothed female naked male). You will find a few references to my dress in part III and IV.

Well written erotica, nice thing with the age difference and well rounded characters with evocative description. Hot stuff.

What an awesome story. I love to be part of that action, naked and bound. Very hot.

Bare Hugs

Nudy

The quality of the writing is what is really impressive. I'd be happy to read a novel by PoisonedEve on a non-erotic subject.

Ed

amazing!!!

A bit off the beaten (pun intended) path, but very sexy. Confidence in a woman (even in a teen) is quite stimulating and always a virture for any Domme. Lets hope for more...:)