All Comments on 'Sweet Torture'

You do this quite well for what appears to be a first story.

Please continue. I will be watching for more from you.

what a hot story. thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. five stars from me and I look forward to reading more from you.

I loved it. well done on your first submission. hjkl;

Excellent.

Enough said.

if this an early piece of writing it's very good, well done