All Comments on 'Swing Open, Swing Closed'

If you do not know your subject matter DON'T WRITE ABOUT IT. You just come across like a fucking asshole!

Thank you sir,for your efforts.You provide a medium for those like me who aren't into tv,movies,news etc.And by doing so,those like me can read,assimilate,enjoy,and get some time to reflect on our own lives.Keep up the good work,we NEED you!

Well written of course, but terribly sad. This is a tale of an evil person taking advantage of a fool. A fool that is loved by her husband and her kids. The way these tales generally work is that the fool comes close to losing it all but wakes up to the truth before it is too late. When you let the tale go beyond the point of redemption, it becomes pure, awful tragedy. Forget about tagging these stories: "cheating" "revenge" "infidelity" - how about "tragedy" "comedy" "salvation". No offense, but I never want to read another story as sad as this one was. Life is too hard to sit down and read this stuff.

At least twice it was claimed that she drugged Greg, but according to the story Wanda did it without her knowledge. Granted, Wanda wouldn't have backed her up, but she didn't even TRY to deny drugging him.

And as for the "abandonment", Greg wouldn't let her come home, so how can SHE be charged with abandonment?

In any case, Joyce should definitely fuck up Wanda, what does she have to lose at this point?

throwing her out of the house did not constitute abandonment.

she was not involved in drugging her husband

beside that the story was good and I enjoyed it including the outcome

Why not beat the shit out of Wanda?

Joyce needs to write a letter to her ex-husband and his new wife explaining what happened, then put a couple rounds into Wanda's head. I'd suggest a more complex revenge that doesn't involve her going to jail, but I don't think Joyce is bright enough to pull it off.

She lost her husband because she was stupid, but for her to get out of that, she must take revenge of the bitch that frame her, and the only possible is kill her in a hurtfull way...

..Wanda needs to die .

Wanda.

cut out her tongue.

poke out her eyes.

bathe her in acid.

joyce.

lobotomy & a padded cell for life.

i fully understand that the Author is using his usual method of a 28lb hammer to crack open a fresh egg.

However , on this occassion the Manipulation is way too extreme & the Stupidity of the wife is beyond the pale.

i realise that All to Often the advice & help of

"so called friends" is utter rubbish & bs when applied

to marital problems or the discontent within a relationship.

and that the stupidty & braindead actions of those within the marriage / relationship often exasperate the situation , rather than solve the problems .... but with this story the Author has taken that to a level i have not seen before , and frankly the story is not enjoyable , or interesting .

in all honesty it's Car Crash Literature gone mad

xxxhugsxxx

well written & am sure it achieves the Authors intended aims.

ie. to enrage & disgust as many readers as possible

frankly this one should come with a public health warning attached to the top.

Do Not Read if you have

Heart problems

High Blood pressure

breathing dificulties

stress related medical conditions

anger management issues

I have no problem with Wanda. She was completely honest about who she is. She wasn't looking to screw a guy over, but instead looking out for her baby sister. If anything she should get an award for being sister of the year. Its not her fault that a housewife got bored and looked elsewhere.

Between Wanda, a evil, manipulating, lying, betraying, backstabbing slut/bitch; Joyce, a terminally selfish, stupid, myopic, self-possessed narcissistic moron; Elise, a clueless, naive, bimbo spacekadet; Greg, the classic wimp/cuck and the convoluted not to say totally contrived plot; lies 4 pages of wasted time and space!

@ Anonymous 02/05/15...LOL, I couldn't have put it better myself, agree completely!

why, because, the plot worked. Anyone who has read these stories, and older married folks would know how time in a marriage changes people. Unfortunately, many of the readers haven't lived long enough to know how accurate this story could be. That old high school foot ball jock that now weighs 350 lbs. or the head cheer leader that looks like a barrel, They know.

Of course chapter 2 would be the revenge, or retribution on Wanda, I know I wouldn't settle for anything less.

Just please stop.

Well said, Anonymous 02/05/15, even though several words were misspelled.

As for me, I've noticed that many of StangStar's stories have incredibly stupid wives doing incredibly stupid things and then being incredibly dense about comprehending their impact on her marriage and befuddled when have such drastic consequences.

Also, each husband seems to be a Mustang owning Macho who, after learning of his wife's infidelity, motors down the block, finds a safe place to park and then reasons out why his wife having spent the last six and a half years stealthily sneaking out to be fucked to orgasmic oblivion by 59 other men (his two brothers and three cousins included) is somehow his own fault and, therefore, he deserves it.

open and shut have different interpetations, TK U MLJ LV NV

Dude why the fuck do you treat your wives so bad? I know you write them as stupid as fuck but after they cheat and you fuck their lives up why do you continue to shit on them? Even assholes need redemption now and then. You just keep piling shit on them. I know these BTB motherfuckers want blood but FUCK THEM CUNTS! Show some compassion to your characters once and awhile. Damn!

Anon - obviously your just another slut/cheating wife or some tranny who is obviously related to that bt2 aka vassieassie (brain dead tranny). Get back on your meds!

OK, you wrote Joyce to be a selfish, self-absorbed, mindless moron who takes advise from the town slut. How about she finally wakes up when Wanda reveals herself outside the church and in a fit of rage, Joyce stabs her to death with a metal nail file.

The bitch needed help not to be set up and shot thru the grease. She was a really dumb broad without a lick of sense who got played. If this had been a guy every body would crying how the he was played not how bad he is. I hope they find themselves in her shoes some day.

Joyce was stupid but Wanda needed to die, horribly and painfully. Joyce should have killed her

or someone of similar intellect. I get your parody of the bored wife getting her just deserts, but this woman is just too stupid to care about. Thanks for trying.

Pretty bad story overall though.

Wanda is one fucked up bitch!

guess what he hates it! heheheheehehehehehehe He's such a fuck liar. This insane ass wipe reads every one of the LW and cuck stories he can find. They remind him of his dead ex wife the whore who fucked him over his entire marriage !

Same shit, different day.

StangStar is one of my favorites, but this story is far down the list. Someone needs to get Wanda off the board.

Wife was raped and twisted into cheating to destroy her marriage but never mentioned anything to the police or her husband or even freaked out when told. this one is not believeable.

Why do people hate this story so much?

I've been spending a lot of my free time reading down the list of Stang's stories. This is one of a number of stories that I don't understand why people don't like it. I'm also reading down the comments and, to me, not a whole lot of them make sense.

Wanda's a bitch. I agree. Joyce should be after that ass for what she did. But as a realist, I can't ignore the fact that if Joyce had more faith in both herself and her marriage, Wanda couldn't have possibly been in a position to interfere. As Wanda pointed out, it was at Joyce's own admission that she felt the marriage had grown stagnant. However, at no point, at least during the story, did she decide to go to her husband and really communicate with him about all of that. So yeah sure, Wanda's a snake for slithering her way through. But Joyce was the one who left her an opening. So she really deserved what she got, though I do reiterate that Joyce should be after that ass.

I also see those comments about how the husband A) is a cuck; and/or B) should be ready and willing to divorce Elise once Wanda's machinations were discovered. My question to both is why. Granted, Joyce was played, but she still cheated and he divorced her. That doesn't sound like a cuckold to me. And as for Elise, I'm putting myself in the husband's shoes. Sure, my newfound sister in law was the reason my now ex-wife is my now ex-wife. And yes, I loved my now ex-wife to death. But as far as I know, my now ex-wife was neither A) raped, nor; B) coerced in any feasible way to do what she did to me. Persuaded perhaps, yes. But that's more of a question of will power and faith in the marriage than anything else, the latter of which she proved she had little of. I now have a woman that has faith in me, herself, and most importantly, our marriage. Why would I want to give that up because my newfound sister-in-law proved that my wife was actually not good for me?

Maybe people think that women (well, if we're being honest, that should be "<b>anybody</b>") can't possible be this selfish, asinine, and careless about other people in their lives like Joyce was. Well, I can tell you from personal experience, they can.

I loved the story!

5-stars!

<i>PS to StangStar</i>

Just a personal observation: if the story still rates over 4 out of 5 stars after it being published 8-1/2 years ago, then you should respectfully ignore the haters.

"<i>You're never going to please everyone, and if you do, there's something wrong.</i>"

<i>Joe Moe from Chicago</i>

WOW! Never saw that ending coming at all!! Very interesting story overall. Thanks

Amazing how many stories wife feels unattractive etc when hubby tells her otherwise and uses that as excuse to cheat

I am sure it happens in reality

Warned by husband she no good but not only associated but believed

Not drugged beginning but when was didn't do anything about it at least file charges even if will be dismissed for lack of proof it will put them on radar

But overall good

Így ez nem hihető a befejezés! Nincs olyan ember aki ebbe belenyugodna, mindent elveszíteni csak úgy hogy csendben elsétál !Ha örökké börtönben maradna akkor is végeznie kellett volna a manipuláló kurvával ,példát statuálva mindenki számára,mert már úgy is mindegy volt ,az élete véget ért,sz.rrá fordult!

Joyce was certainly stupid and kept compounding her mistakes but in the beginning she did love her husband and kids and may never have gone off the rails without Wanda. What happens to her? Greg certainly had legitimate reason for divorce but keeping her children from her, really? Once again, the greatest evil in this story is Wanda and she won, BS, one star

I dont understand all the hate Wanda gets all she did was pitch a commercial she just leave out the side effects.

SS6, I love your stories. There was a few places where you used the name Joyce instead of Wanda and that did hurt the story a little. Joyce's lawyer should have explained what she was allowed / not allowed to do during the separation and what the effects would be. What I don't understand is why Joyce didn't go off the deep end after Wanda explained it all at the wedding. Joyce lost it all, and most of it was due to Wanda's manipulation and her poor self esteem. Joyce needs to realize Greg and the children are gone, and she should do everything she can to PERMANENTLY mess up Wanda - i.e. crippling, maiming (cut / burn off her clitoris, or something equivalent), possible murder. What does she have to lose - nothing. She could bring a gun to work and empty the entire magazine. Time to plan and execute...

I got 2 words for you Stangy......... Hellcat Challenger. LOL.

Who the Hell is Joyce?

First why would she agree to anything after Wanda drugged her husband? No one in their right mind would have had anything to do with Wanda after that. Why would she agree to no visitation of her kids? The abandonment claim by hubby was complete bullshit if he refused to let her see her kids. Her lawyer would have fought that tooth and nail. Then she gets drugged by Wanda and raped, and still doesn't know what is going on? Not a chance in the world is anyone that fucking stupid. Last but certainly not least, after Wanda's big reveal she doesn't collect evidence and sue the fuck out of her? Nope, I'm sorry. There are to many unbelievable parts to this. And for my last question, why didn't she get a restraining order against Elise to stay away from the kids? That one would have actually made sense. Hell her lawyer should have suggested it.

Just remember the old saying: you flooze you lose

I usually expect better from this author, but this one was too far over the top with the wife being THAT stupid.

This one didn’t resonate very well. Too many stupid people in it. Just not a believable or enjoyable story. Thanks for your try.

something snapped in the wife alright, stupidity broke out and took over. That said, she needs to put wanda away for life, break her body , fuck up her looks maybe cripple her and then she can relax.

Quite a sad story. It's hard to imagine a wife that stupid, but I suppose they exist. If I knew I'd been drugged, I would go straight to the hospital, file a police report, and get a blood test. I think it's a greater betrayal than sex and a fast track to divorce.

Joyce should get a shotgun and go fuck up Elise before she picked up the kids, then at the trial, say that it was payback for wanda's actions in breaking up her marriage to Greg to marry her sister to her husband. Or have a note/video detailing all of Wanda's actions sent to the papers/ TV stations, in addition to Wanda and her parents. Thus causing an appropriate level of pain to Wanda, her accomplices, and the parents / relatives in the loss of Elise, due to their manipulations and actions.

Yes Joyce was wrong in her actions, but shit should flow down hill to those (Wanda) that deserve it. Elise was not completely innocent, she should have asked about what happened, especially concerning the drugging party part, and realized her sister was in on the marriage destruction.

I ended up feeling bad for the wife. She was at fault for not appreciating what she had, but then conned so thoroughly that it feels like she only deserves a small part of the blame for what happened. Of course, it was ultimately her decision and a bad one to try that first time to see if Greg wanted to swing, but she regretted it immediately and was honestly tricked into thinking that it would help her marriage (bizarre, but apparently true). Then she regretted it terribly when she saw how upset Greg got, but was once again conned into all the rest of it and it all snowballed from there. At no point did she actually seem like much of a cheater except in a simple black-and-white sense. I don't blame Greg for leaving her. He seems like a good guy in every way. Nevertheless, I don't feel at all like she deserved the outcome. And Wendy was just an evil bitch.

I foresee Wanda having many, many, many “accidents” in her future.

Pretty good but Wanda did not get what she has coming to her. I'd suggest a baseball bat to break her back such that she never walks again. Next, sue Wanda, her husband and "the club" for conspiracy to break up her marriage.

Joyce should have told Greg that she WAS NOT involved with the drugging on the first date and that she WAS drugged when Wanda brought home the first guy.

While Joyce was a dumbs**t, I never saw any evidence that Greg really tried to change or resolve the situation.

mfj

Joyce is literally every woman .

A történeted egy kissé eltúlzott! ilyen,ennyire hülye feleség nemigazán létezik,hogy ilyen könnyen átverés áldozata legyen! Már a legelején is gyenge érv volt a különélés indoklása,még csak nem is történt szex ,csak némi tapogatózás,de az is megszakadt a férj brutális támadása miatt! Egyáltalán nem életszerű ,főleg ott ahol 2 kicsi gyerek van!

Stupid is as stupid does great story

Wanda would not survive.

Usually Stang’s women are STUPID but Greg has to be the dumbest piece of shit on Literotica. What an effing MORON. He didn’t see anything strange about marrying the sister of the whore that drugged him and destroyed his marriage. I sue Greg along with all the rest as part of a criminal conspiracy. Let them all do jail time.

So disappointed in you, Stang. This was shaping up really well until on page two Joyce apparently became a completely different person to the one she was at the outset. Thoroughly confused, I had to re read several passages to figure out that the MC was no longer Joyce but the character who started out as Wanda was now called Joyce. It made my brain ache so I had to bale out.

4 Stars as Greg's wife was almost as dumb as my ex . My Ex's best friend tuned her into the town Pump . She then told guys we had an open relationship . Then My asshole lawyer told Me to be nice to her or we might end up back in court . 5 Years later I told My Lawyer what I thought of him ... I was Smart enough to make sure their were no witness for Me

To Anonymous, Joyce was married to Greg. Wanda was a woman that Joyce worked with. Elise was Wanda’s sister. Nobody changed into anybody else, that’s how they started the story and that’s how they finished it, maybe you should read something less challenging.

Are there really women around in America (or anywhere else) as Joyce, or many other female characters in these stories?

Dude, you should read your own stories, Wanda turns into Joyce...good trick, you must be breathing too much exhaust from your Mustang, check it out, carbon monoxide will kill you.

wish wanda wld get hers, i think the silly wabbit wld be better off killing wanda and herself. rk

This is the problem with the author, he starts of writing the cheating wife as lovable and I really do believe that she loves her husband. But as usual if he's not set for a reconciliation story, the author change the wife's character to a complete 180° where we don't even hate her actions, infact in most the author's stories I don't really hate the cheating wife infact it's the douche of the husband we hate. The author body shame a lot of women in his stories and it's concerning. And as in most of the his stories the plot goes 1) mc finds out the wife cheated and wouldn't even talk or hear her side of stories, he just withdraw from her or runs away 2) he replaces her with an even more beautiful woman in a matter of months as opposed to loving his wife for 5 or 10 years. That's the gist of every story of this author

This author's wives cheat for the craziest reasons, in complete conflict with there character for many years. Sigh. 4 stars.