by JackDavid
A fantastically arousing story, full of intimate detail, with just the right amount of story to build up to fantastic sex - I only wish I could see the photos!
Why no comments? It's slipped through the net...maybe needs a little angst, or grit. But it's a slick and stylish read, I enjoyed it. Thanks, Mancelt.
The twist at the end was a neat touch. The switching of narrator was also handled rather well. Any chance we'll hear more of Felicity / Amity? It'd be interesting to know how she evolves from the character we see at the end of this story (daring, but still restrained) to the no-holds-barred version we're shown in the opening scene. Also, how does her relationship with Tom develop?