All Comments on 'T & A'

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ErotonautErotonautover 12 years ago
Great story

The twist at the end was a neat touch. The switching of narrator was also handled rather well. Any chance we'll hear more of Felicity / Amity? It'd be interesting to know how she evolves from the character we see at the end of this story (daring, but still restrained) to the no-holds-barred version we're shown in the opening scene. Also, how does her relationship with Tom develop?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Classy writing.

Why no comments? It's slipped through the net...maybe needs a little angst, or grit. But it's a slick and stylish read, I enjoyed it. Thanks, Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Brilliant

A fantastically arousing story, full of intimate detail, with just the right amount of story to build up to fantastic sex - I only wish I could see the photos!

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