by seasparks
Good plot? O. K. Characterizarions. But Way too short, or maybe not. It just may be perfect.
Brilliant! I don't normally read non-erotic stories, but the title reeled me in. The buildup of the character in the first few paras made the story. You know him, yet he still has a aura of mystery surrounding him. I love the 'traveller' aspect of him.
this is an example of an excelltn short sotry. I loved it! and here I normally don't read the non-erotic, but the topic drew me in! good show. I'd love to read your follow up, if you write one...
Damn this story brought back memories of days in the oil patch and the nights at the bars playing cards. Keep up the writing. I can't wait to read more.
There once was a guy from Nebraska
Whom I originally thought said Alaska
He shows off his style
Makes us wait a while
Then amazes us with his talent (sorry couldn't think of another aska word LOL)
Keep up the awesome work seasparks!!! ;-)