All Comments on 'Take Me Away Ch. 01'

Good start to your story, I hope there will be more chapters. Really got my interest!

I have to agree with the other person. What a great way of starting a story. You seriously grabbed my attention lol. I would love to hear more from you. I actually can't wait for the next chapter, I want to know her reaction to his revealing of being a vampire. CANT WAIT! hahaha

Great job!

I too have felt like this at opportune times in my life. Too bad I can't find a vampire to take me away and love and cherish me! keep going I love it!

Great start! There were a few grammar errors, but nothing so big to really distract from the story. I liked the beginning and I hope that you write more.

this is a great beginning and u have got me hooked already i want to read the rest of it now. plz give me the rest of the story

very cool story amazing start

i wish i could have a vampire take me away and love me forever and ever. i hope there will be more chapters

Come on man, don't leave it at that. This could be the beginnings of a great story. Set up greatly and you've gotten the story on a good start. Please finish this tale.

I love this please keep going!