All Comments on 'Take Me Ch. 01'

That's just mean. Pleeease write some more. Oh please

This only works if it is going to be revealed that this is part of a role play and she knows the assailant. If her assailant is genuine I simply don't believe her almost immediate sexual arousal to her situation. I can't really empathise with a character who doesn't mind if she is murdered as long she is shagged by her murderer first. Only someone utterly insane could think like that.

:) first, thanks for reading, Corpse Rider. I appreciate your well-reasoned and well-written comment. I won't give away the ending, but I will say this: 1) no one said she will or will not be murdered, but I LOVE that you took it there; 2) what she knows or doesn't will definitely be made clear, and I respect why you have a hard time with empathy, given your presumption; and 3) by the end, you will have your answer to whether or not she is, indeed, utterly mad. she may be, but perhaps for different reasons than you think right now...

again, thanks for the read and comment! love that you shared your insights!! -BN

What total bullshit writing. ""My slender waist", "my dainty wrist" --- nobody talks about mantelshelves that way.