All Comments on 'Take What U Want Ch. 01'

by Dom_man76

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 16 years ago
Interesting!

Nice idea. As long as she enjoyed it. I guess she did!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
awsome

i really loved that story, mabye u can make it go longer, some more perverted stuff as well, but i hope u continue with them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
awesome

Great Story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A twist?

Loved the story! But what if it turned out to be her daughter instead?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
awesome

Awesome story..please write more..you are quite talented..please don't stop writing..I see it has been a few years since your last submission... please continue.Your story had me squirming and wanting to escape to her world. I must admit this is a first for me of this genre.. I really really enjoyed it..

Little One

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