All Comments on 'Taken & Subjugated'

you are an amazing wonderful writer. The way you build up the story - heightens the excitement oooh gawd....wonderful.

Okay, really? I couldn't even finish the first page, please please try NOT to use certain words over multiple times.

There are times I can tell when writers have no clue of what they write about, even to the point that their a male/or female writing under a different sex.

Don't just see it in your mind, FEEL it. Your wording is almost borning in it's virginal text.

I call itself Rupa...ur bio says male???? Are u a trans? Faggot? Gay? Only a confused sexuality person could write such crap...erotica about ladies by a male ...what a joke!! Be better off wearing saree bindi bangles and going sucking some real cock for a change!