All Comments on 'Taken & Subjugated'

I call itself Rupa...ur bio says male???? Are u a trans? Faggot? Gay? Only a confused sexuality person could write such crap...erotica about ladies by a male ...what a joke!! Be better off wearing saree bindi bangles and going sucking some real cock for a change!

Okay, really? I couldn't even finish the first page, please please try NOT to use certain words over multiple times.

There are times I can tell when writers have no clue of what they write about, even to the point that their a male/or female writing under a different sex.

Don't just see it in your mind, FEEL it. Your wording is almost borning in it's virginal text.

you are an amazing wonderful writer. The way you build up the story - heightens the excitement oooh gawd....wonderful.