Taken Ch. 04

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"Just close your eyes and enjoy it Skye, there's nothing wrong with you enjoying what I'm doing," he whispered and suddenly I was seized by a tightening in my body and I cried out, vision exploding in hot white light as I experienced my first orgasm. I'd often read about it, my friend had often told me about it, but nothing compared me for the feeling of it. I had been saving myself for marriage; I didn't even masturbate for fear of ruining myself for my future husband. I was breathless as I dangled from the ropes and Christopher pulled his hands away with a smile. Pulling out a pocket knife he cut the ropes and I collapsed to my knees.

"Not so bad, is it Skye?" I looked up at him, body riding a euphoric high. He crouched down in front of me, smiling smugly as he cupped my face. Words escaped me as I tried to focus, tried to think through the haze of complete bliss, and I vowed to myself I'd make them pay. I would make them all pay.

"And I've only just started," he announced.

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jadewinchesterjadewinchesterabout 7 years agoAuthor
Guess what

If I were to write it accurately, literotica doesn't post it. So you got a problem, talk to them

cricketmusecricketmuseabout 7 years ago
Magic orgasm

Beaten, whipped (a lot), raped vaginally & anally in like 12 hours and she comes from some light fingering? Uh, no. Fear orgasms are possible, the brain needs a quick dopamine assist. But fear plus that level of physical violence means her body would be pretty well shut down simply from exhaustion. Add in her "dull" moments of emotional state and her pleasure centers have pretty much taken the night off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
how about

evil mama getting a stroke, ending up hemiplegic in a wheelchair, unable to speak.

how about her being the only witness to L's preparing for revenge and final escape.

(Ok, escaping together with the other not yet braindead woman and all kids, just to keep things politically correct).

Or... she could get liberated by the Feds...

Please keep on writing, i'm enjoying the story and want to find out if I'm right.

jadewinchesterjadewinchesteralmost 10 years agoAuthor
christian?

Christian? You mean christopher? hmm. we shall see. I have many turns and twists for this story.

Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 10 years ago
This story is interestin

Keep up the good work. I like how you left it with her hating the orgasm. I want to see how Clyde reacts when he's sober. And if Christian does fall in love with her, that gives her more power. I also want Evil Mama to have some retribution. I can't wait to see how the story goes.

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