All Comments on 'Taking the Family'

Adequate story although the Tony versus Tom names were confusing and sometimes i think that they got accidentally swapped around.

Thanks,

Cyberdolphnow

I'd love to see this continued

Way to many grammar mistakes and names kept getting mixed up. Couldn't you use different sounding names? Kept taking me out of the story.

Getting adicted of your story, pls continue

Finish the story love it

A shame that you never continued this story it was just getting good

Read a similar story some years back. Not sure if it was on Lit or another site. Multiple parts, in which the husband, upon learning that his wife planned the original break-in, forced her to commit sex acts with him, friends, and strangers. Meanwhile he began an affair with his daughter, in full view of his wife, sometimes making her participate.

Wouldn't mind rereading it, but can't find it.

Pathetic. You have mental issues, and a bent heart. You should get help.