All Comments on 'Tame the Untamable Ch. 04'

that was a damn good read. Kudos for getting an editor. Made a hell of a difference.

I was expecting her to hold out for marriage and not just a fuck. Loral seemed to be the sister that was firm in who she wanted and her terms but you wrote her like the other sister.

Could've been so much more.

This story was a blast to read. Loved everything about it.

Loral has not given in and she not like the other sister. You'll see...for updates with my writing go to www.writingsbychynamarie.tumblr.com!!!!!!!!!!

Let's see : assault, rape, b&e, trespassing. Hope Cade spends lots of time in jail. Her brother Kyle is a royal ass as well. Like Brody at least. Until this last chapter was enjoying the story.

I don't really know What you were expecting? It clearly states that...

I'm kind of disappointed she gave in so easily :( she should have had some more fight in her.