by claretwine
Just don't use words like "slut".. takes away from a perfectly hot story. Besides that, very good!
Listen claretwine, if such a game show ever happened, I'd be cumming non stop! I'm a dirty blonde in more than one way, honey. Keep writing this kind of story and I'll be waiting for the next game show.
Tingling in Arizona
I love editing your stories. You are an awesome writer and your imagination is perfect . . . angel.