All Comments on 'Team Bonding Ch. 01'

safe, sane, consensual? If a girl is raped, even violently, and then has a sexual response and cums, is it not still rape?

A valid and very serious comment, and one which I have pondered at length. To explain, my stories are just fantasy and should never reflect real life. However, although they are based on submission and by nature have to be a little non-consensual, I will try harder to tread the fine line between what is acceptable and what is not.

Chapter 2 is still being edited so I will take your welcomed comments on board and would hope you continue to read my work.

Well written. Turned me on immensely. Thanks for writing this.

love. it. please. finish!!!