by rjordan
I haven't laughed that hard in a while. It might have been fun to take it further, but then again, some things are best left to the imagination. With good actors, it could be a great audio story.
I can't wait to try it- oops, my phone's ringing now- bye.
Hee! Boy meets girl, boy gets horny, boy loses girl, boy changes his phone number. Excellent! Perfect length.
I really enjoyed this short, yet hilarious story! A very good idea, that comes across well.
Very enjoyable. I love how the encounter progresses, and how the table turns. Great job!
Very original way to get back at the telemarketers. I'll have to try it the next time I get a call--but then I get a lot of calls from Indian males trying to 'fix' my computer. I don't really care what color of underwear they have on.
This made me laugh out loud. I will use this method of handling telemarketing calls from now on! :)
Now why didn’t I think of that.? Very humorous dialogue development, and more than a grain of truth about human interaction.