All Comments on 'Tell Me'

Spare and tight, as a good short story must be. Thank you

Thought it was realistic, had a nice sense of mystery and suspense to it, and enjoyed the titillation of it as well. Would have enjoyed a bit more descriptive expression of what the characters (mainly the girl) looked like, but well done.

Enjoyed reading this.

MF

This was so good, so well crafted. Good writing, erotic and suspenseful. I'm straight and it made me hard.

This is a beautiful subtle piece of writing. It is the perfect sequel to Marion, another exquisitely erotic story. It prompted many fantasies for me. Thank you. Please keep writing. There are not many of your capabilities writing on this site.

Great story. Well written, and quite hot. More please!

You are an amazing writer. I love reading erotic stories but am often pained by their terrible literary quality, so to come across a story like this was a real pleasure. Thank you.