All Comments on 'Temporary Roommates'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Outstanding. Would love more of this. Brilliant work.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
Wonerful Sex

Great read, I agree that more is better! Really want to see more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
It was great

I thought it was very good and think u should make more (th author should make more) cuz their a master at these kinda stories I give it 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Yet, she cheated...

she's into a committed relationship and cheats on her mate, no matter the sex of all parties. It's interesting that no-one picked up on that...

RichardARichardAover 8 years ago
Beautiful

Opening such a private area to someone else to caress and kiss and fuck deeply is the ultimate surrender. Nothing feels quite like it. Except maybe returning the gift. Thank you for this story. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wanted to like it but there was no build up - no seduction. The moment Erin reveals her Lesbian thoughts going on for years - the sex becomes inevitable. Resistance - creates tension which creates sexual build up.

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