All Comments on 'Tempting Tamara'

Another fine piece of writing. Short but not lacking in squirm factor! ;-)

Don't make us wait so long again!

The UK slang threw me. Had to look up FMB (Fuck Me Boots). Dunno if vst-top was a vest or not. Car-Park is a parking lot (in the U.S.).

But nice and to the point.

Not sure the wife had a brain in her head altho the writer tried to give her some brains on the way there. With the flashes going off she had to know she would be on a pay for view site. The husband joined and was also pictured. Some ends any type of modesty in their lives. She appears to have been a slut after the first act as mentioned in the closing. Another ruined marriage goes. Erotic if you just want sex. Not very good if you expect any sense of reality.

Nice to see you writing again, Mr A.

piece of writing, GA ;)

That was so hot. I need to do that with my wife.

You just know she'll fuck some more guys to turn on her husband even more.

Really stupid story from start to finish. Only a true moron would enjoy this.