All Comments on 'Ten Shade of Black'

Hey everyone. I did not know this story would be posted today. Anyways, I hope people out there will enjoy it for what's it worth, and I hope my use of the f-bombs does not offend.And I strongly suggest you guys read this chapter on my blog site as well, because there is a warning, and a authors note. Let me know what you think.

This would be better with an editor. It has a lot of missing words and grammar errors (inc one in the title), which made it hard for me to concentrate on the story.

To the anonymous pin head reckneck piece of shit who likes to use the term nigger, I'd like you to try and kick my ass you nazi motherfucker! I would love to stick my 9mm down your throat.

Ignore the people who can't wait for the story to develop.

Please continue with the second chapter.

I had to find you on twitter having accessed your new blog ....a few links to your stories here wouldnt go amiss on your blog page .loving this one so far.

Liking the story line, but the grammar is atrocious.

This is a really interesting story