All Comments on 'Ten to One'

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Simple49erSimple49eralmost 14 years ago
And the point

of this "relationship" is?

jasonnhjasonnhalmost 14 years ago
No thanks

Stay with a wife who carries out 10 to 1 retribution or promises to destroy you in a divorce? Of course he's not much of a prize either. Then it seems like they are screwing with everyone but each other. The point of their "relationship" is ?????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
he should have

taken her "statements" and used them for divorce to show her how he could do better. Of course, not minding a true open marriage, he couldn't have gained much. But just out of pride, one to ten ??? hard to swallow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
retarded

just retarded

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
if this is a "marriage"

I'll stick to being single

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Crummy!

Stupid and crummy. Turn in your word processor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Funky dialogue...

but that's what made it fun! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
soo , if she paid him 10 to 1

shouldn't he bang 100 gals next? And then the wife can do 1000 dudes. Interesting logic there...

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 14 years ago
Funny

Should be in Humor or Comedy category.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
What was your cousin doing at your wife's relative's do?

Oh I get it...I demand a new "Hillbilly" category. Fun writing but a little tame for my tastes...Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

A male writer with a FEMALE name. That says it all. Stupid story. Stupid writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Look at AUTHOR'S BIO... from the UK

that explains soooo much why this "ahem" STORY is awful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
OO

OO

DeckviewDeckviewalmost 14 years ago
A bit of good tongue in cheek humor

I like it. If I had taken it seriously, I would not have liked it much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Typical

Usual limey shit, a whore wife and a dick sucking husband. All should contract aids, including the writer.

katibkatibalmost 14 years ago
So

So. humor finds a place in Lit. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
C-(For your effort...)

You´re a thirteen year old, right?

Tx Tall TalesTx Tall Talesalmost 14 years ago
Ignore the Trolls

Nicely done, humorous and cute. Could be a little more detailed - but fun.

saratusaratuover 12 years ago

There was no story here,,, just some more garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

dribble, why be the married? One financially supports the other suppose, but room-mates. SOmeone to say, guess whom I had sex with yesterday, etc. For her a good deal - tolerated if she maintained him in a high lifestyle, but even then....

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Unexamined morality

Beliefs about ANYTHING which are accepted without careful consideration tend to cave in when experience suggests the benefits are greater than first supposed AND promised negative consequences are less than expected (or absent!)

This story details this type of re-analysis...unfortunately, some of the long-term consequences are not recognized until later, but they ARE likely to bite this couple in the ass, eventually!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
stupid story

by a stupider woman about an even stupider man

-5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
dumb

That says it all

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I Cheated On My Wife Once

That was over a year ago. She, of course, found out about it. Now, for the past 18 months my wife's girlfriends take great pleasure in telling me, by name, the latest man or men who are currently enjoying the sexual pleasures of my wife. The count has risen to over 50.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
One for one, ok

but ten? No way. Good thing she provided written proof to take to the court to get a better split of the assets. Goodbye and good riddance.

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