All Comments on 'Tennis Camp Ch. 03'

Not much really dirty language, but very erotic - nice one, Strawbs!

I can smell the sweet smell, feel the excitment and marvel at the excellent job of the author. YOU HAD ME THERE!

one of the sexiest stories i've read. great detail and pace, well drawn emotion, superb balance. this is close to perfect. after reading hundreds of stories, this is the only post i've left. it's that good.

(From the author)

The readers have a slight preference for this chapter over the others. After reading it again, I think that preference is because of Becky's character and not because the sex description was any better. I had fun with it.

I completly love this story from start to finish! Slow and steady won this race while keeping things exciting, I was impressed with the true character development mixing with a sexy first time.

Ah, the making of a woman. A very well thought out and written story with plenty of angst, drama, love and some sensitive sex. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.