All Comments on 'Terri's Man'

I like the story. I feel this story can be a foundation to a series. If you decided I feel you could add more depth to these characters and extend this story into a series.

This was so good from the beginning, even how they plotted their first sexual escapade together. Keep writing...

The story was beautifully written. There is only one minor error, however. It was Mercury that made the Cougar XR7, not Lincoln.

But be that as it may, you're very beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your work. Please feel free to check out mine, as well.