by HandcuffGirl
Not a fan of rape, but I like your description of Cardinal Girl
I loved the original and this is a very satisfying continuation of a pretty unique setup. Thanks to the both of you for creating and evolving this heroine's universe-- and I'm sure readers will appreciate any further adventures for CG either of you can come up with!
Very, very nice story beginning. I think, it's too early to judge this story, but I wish you would not quit. i will be waiting for the next chapter. only one suggestion: if you would describe actual sex a little more it would only add to your stories..