All Comments on 'Thankful Thanksgiving'

Please correct spelling and other proofreading goofs that will enhance readability.

You need to carry this story further. It has legs

You have two author names and no chapter numbers.

I could care less about the punctuation or the spelling. This is hot!! pay no attention to pseudo proof readers "oglerupnorthxxx" just keep writing these blistering sex scenes.

Out STANDING!!

seriously good one this; make it more romantic; make them go crazy for each other and make them talk dirty to each other while doing it yet they begin to feel for each other like they are true soulmates, man and woman, husband and wife; daughter comes to know and approves it; let them exchange rings and seal their fate together in their private world bonded to each other eternally. It will be nice if you could get the story going in this direction. Make her pregnant too, yes.