All Comments on 'Thanksgiving Feast'

This could have been a really hot story if not for the extremely poor grammar. You need to get an editor to help out and clean up all the grammar and spelling errors.

Come on guys! It's a good story. Is'nt good hot pornography what you were looking for when you logged on?

So lay off the criticism on grammar and spelling. Sit back and enjoy.

To blitzz05 Congratulations on a nice job but does it really belong in the incest category? Banging ones mother-in-law can be dangerous if ones wife and father-in-law are not broad minded. But it's not technically incest--just a lot of fun.

spelling and grammar mean everything when writing for others to read ESPECIALLY SINCE THIS IS NOT A PORN SITE IT IS AN EROTICA SITE AND THERE FORE WRITERS NEED TO MAKE DAMN SURE THEY DO IT PROPERLY OR NOT AT ALL.