All Comments on 'The 21st Birthday Party'

Sensational - absolutely loved it. Gorgeous ladies, fantastic sex. Can't wait for the next instalment

Great!!! Do it again

"Then she was upright, standing straight, skirt dropping back like a stage curtain operated by Satan himself, the teasing bastard"

absolutely brilliant....

There's wood on every page. I can't get enough of this stuff. the women are gorgeous, the sex is hot, the tease drives us nuts; it's all there. Please write more when time allows.

Many thanks!

Snow Snake

Beautiful story.You got me engaged right off the bat. I loved the story and how you handeled the girls slow getting each one envolved instead of just throwing them at us.Very good:very good indeed

Finally some decent erotic fiction! I loved that fact that even though you teased us a little, at least you got some action into every page!

Sarena <3

Great voyeurism and exhibitionism reading - one of the best of the best. Great tease, and great action. Extremely well written. More please!

Best dam voyuerism story I have read.It had everthing from exhibiting to voyuer everthing I like.

mmmmmmmmmm that was good. I'm still cumming. MORE! MORE! MORE!

a really great story....more ...more ...more...!!!!

fuck me as well ooohhhhhhhhh

Just incredible. Loved how you kept everyone in character the whole times without magical transformations into fantasy-indulging sluts. The treatment of Annie was perfect, balancing the coercion with the fact that she truly enjoyed it, making it pretty apparent that they were doing it for her, not just to please themselves.

I loved it from start to finish. The storyline is good and quite original I think. However, it is the way you write that made this so good. You write intelligently, with wit and a very good use of English. Look forward to reading more of your submissions. Thanks

At first I did find your story hard to follow and I didn't quite catch all the characters but got that most of them were blonde.. wanna throw in a hot brunette or red head some time? It's not fair to let all the blondes have the fun. Else than that, your story was a real turn on for me. I finger fucked my pussy and am now dripping wet and ready for a real fuck. Can't wait til my guy comes home to take care of that.

I love your story telling- what about a teacher student one or a cheerleader or something? I adore costume. Just the thought of a girl in stockings turned me on immensely. Can't wait for more later

Miss Em.