All Comments on 'The Actuary Couldn't Figure'

You caught her! Think she's going to have to pay the price for her mistake and more. Thanks for the fantasy. It's a great read and looking forward to more about her.

Oh I want more. What happens? Does she give her ass? This is a great tale and I love the way you built it up rather than slam bammed the story. I want to know what happens so please write the sequel.

Another outstanding job. It was interesting to see this story develop, and I hope the next installment comes real soon. Does she or does she not pay up because she surely owes this guy a lot. You can tell she is hooked, doesn't want to do what she's being asked to do, but has to do it...or else. Great job!

Well written, a story of manipulation and excercise of control. Is our protaganist a nice person? No, not really. But then, that's not what the category is all about, is it. I rather liked it. (Although, it would have been nice to have known from the outset that there would be a sequel necessary, to complete the tale.)

-- KK in Texas