All Comments on 'The Addicted Natural Ch. 15'

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peteinchicagopeteinchicagoover 14 years ago
Fantastic story

I've enjoyed all chapters in this story. There is another chapter on a different site (ch 16 is also great!) that I hope will be posted here as well. I hope a chapter 17 etc. will be written and posted soon, the auther seems to be indicating that ch. 16 may finish things off, but I hope not. Maybe with enough encouragement he'll continue the series! Lets hope so. Anyway I strongly reccomend this series to everyone

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
What A Turn

of Events as Freddy finds that All of his women are

His Slaves because they All need a Master and they All have Powers he gave No thought too.

then to hear that Brenda Chose him for her Master instead of it being Love. Kinda hurt his Feelings.

Cant wait to see what happens to Menlo will Dee get him back for Freddy or will Freddy Stop Everything?

sunnypbsunnypbover 14 years ago
Very nice

A little different that the stories I usually read but thoroughly enjoying it. Looking forward to seeing more chapters.

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