All Comments on 'The Adventures Of Daddy And Baby'

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madengineer3madengineer3over 16 years ago
Very Nice, and Very Hot

This is an excellent story! No words are wasted, the plot line is easy to follow, the only real surprise is the way the story ends. I like it!!!!!!!

LustHoseLustHoseover 16 years ago
Here's to many more Adventures....

Excellent dialog, racy development. A seriously good read, well crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
the story

very beautiful, occasionally moving, story, except for use of "daddy" and "motherfucker"

neither belonged in this story of instantly developing love and tenderness

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RansomRansomover 16 years ago
Loved it

Thanks for a very enjoyable story about my favorite subject matter. I appreciate your writing and hope we will see more from you. There are precious few new IR

stories here and even fewer this hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
a very nice..

dream, I hope it last for you.

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