by blk_cyberman
This is an excellent story! No words are wasted, the plot line is easy to follow, the only real surprise is the way the story ends. I like it!!!!!!!
Excellent dialog, racy development. A seriously good read, well crafted.
very beautiful, occasionally moving, story, except for use of "daddy" and "motherfucker"
neither belonged in this story of instantly developing love and tenderness
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Thanks for a very enjoyable story about my favorite subject matter. I appreciate your writing and hope we will see more from you. There are precious few new IR
stories here and even fewer this hot.