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All Comments on 'The Alien Zoo Ch. 01'

by John_uk_32

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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please continue?????????

HotTamale13HotTamale13over 11 years ago
Good story, too short, grammatical errors.

This story has a great premise but is basically a skeleton and needs to have been fleshed out. Also, is it me or were the rules on grammatical accuracy a lot laxer back then? This would never have made it through today.

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